Tuesday, April 6, 2010

Dialogue Writing

2. Grandfather: Hello my grand daughter, what are you all watching.

Jane : Grandfather, this is the latest Korean show, it was romantic and terrific to me, all my classmates, the whole school was fond on this drama show!

Grandfather: What show is that? And it is romantic! Hey you are just a little girl, must you really watch that kind of.......show?

Jane:Grandfather, watching this show is not base by age okay? By the way, i am teenager, not a little girl"

Grandfather : Oh Jane, this is really a rubbish! i still remember when i was young liked you, my parents forbid us for watching this kind of show, we were put to bed early, and now.......it is 9 plus and you are to bed yet!"

Jane: Grandfather, now and past is TOTALLY different, so you can't used what you experienced in the past and put in me, okay, i am tired of speaking to you, i go back to sleep right now!

grandfather: Hey........

2 comments:

  1. This is NOT how I expect the dialogues to be written. By now, you should know how I expect it to be done. Please refer to "The Meeting Point" for an example of how the assignment should be like. Please edit your work!

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